Today I am so pleased to welcome Melanie Hansen to Joyfully Jay. Melanie has brought an exclusive (and NSFW) excerpt from her latest release, See My Words (which we reviewed here). She has also brought along a book to give away. Please join me in giving her a big welcome!

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As the orgasm crested and receded, Rylan managed to drag his eyes open and look down, the words of praise and affection dying on his lips as he gasped in shock. Scott’s face was drenched in what appeared to be gallons of spunk, so much that there were clumps of it in his hair. One of his nostrils was plugged, and a great white glob threatened to slide from his forehead right down into his eye.

Rylan wiped it hastily away, choking on his horrified laughter.

Scott blinked up at him. “When I told you earlier I needed a facial,” he said drily, “this isn’t quite what I had in mind.”

Rylan used his thumb to try to clear Scott’s nose. “Oh my God, I’m sorry,” he wheezed. “I was so worked up, and that totally took me by surprise.”

Scott blew semen out of his nostril, grimacing as the mess landed on his lower lip. He brushed it away, muttering, “This seems way sexier in porn, doesn’t it?”

Quivering with laughter, Rylan buried his face in Scott’s neck. “Yeah, you look an absolute mess.” He peeked up at him. “But if this was porn, I’d be licking it off your face and feeding it to you.”

“Eww,” they both said in unison, and Scott wrapped him up in his arms as they gave in to their mirth.

“While we’re being honest about real life versus porn,” Scott gasped, “I gotta say your jizz tastes terrible, Ry.”


Scott snorted at the outrage in Rylan’s tone. “Yeah, you need to eat more fruit or something, darlin’.” He gave a mock shudder, laughing when Rylan punched him on the shoulder.

“You’re such an asshole.”

They cuddled together until Rylan ran his hand through Scott’s stiffening hair. “Let’s get you cleaned up, porn king.”

In the shower, Rylan goofed off with the bodywash, making a bubble beard on Scott’s chin and attempting some horns on his head, exclaiming in renewed horror when the little mounds of lather suddenly slid down and got in his eyes.

“Okay, from now on, you stay away from my face, Rylan Mahoney,” Scott sputtered, rinsing off with frantic motions under the spray. “Don’t you know it’s my fortune? Ask anyone.” He struck a ridiculous pose, batting his eyelashes, his eyes reddened and watery-looking.

Rylan blew him a kiss in silent apology, leering at him. “But you looked so hot with my load all over your face. Wanna do it again.”

Scott grabbed him and hauled him close, nuzzling Rylan’s cheek with his nose. “Whenever you want, baby. Whenever you want.”


See My Words CoverSuccessful underwear model Scott Ashworth is lucky—his attack at the hands of an unknown assailant will leave no visible scars. His professional goals are still within reach, and best of all, his stepbrother Rylan Mahoney is back in his life, their teenage infatuation at last getting the chance to deepen into something more.

Thrown together by the circumstances of Scott’s injury, Rylan’s long-dormant feelings for him are quickly rekindled, though he’s haunted by the memory of Scott’s disappearance on the night of his eighteenth birthday and the six missing years that followed. Rylan pushes Scott for the truth, a firm believer in the maxim that secrets lose their power once they’re shared—but resurrecting old demons almost always comes with a price.

Before Scott knows it, his life is spiraling out of control, his toxic insecurities welling up to threaten the fragile relationship he’s building with Rylan. Learning to let go of the past and believe in himself will be Scott’s greatest challenge, or else he risks losing Rylan forever this time.


Author PhotoMelanie Hansen has spent time in Texas and Florida prisons…for work. She’s been in a room with a 17-year-old mass murderer who was also one of the most soft-spoken and polite teenagers she’s ever met. After a 13-year career as a court reporter, she can tell many stories both hilarious and heartbreaking.

She grew up with an Air Force dad, and ended up marrying a Navy man. After living and working all over the country, she hopes to bring these rich and varied life experiences to her stories about people finding love amidst real-life struggles.

Melanie left the stressful world of the courtroom behind and now enjoys a rewarding career transcribing for a deaf student. She currently lives in Arizona with her husband and two sons.


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